During the pandemic, I experimented with translating Bilal Hassan Mintoâs Model Town (Sanjh 2015)âa collection of Urdu short stories told from the perspective of a preadolescent boy growing up in Lahoreâs Model Town neighborhood during the late 1970s (at the beginning of General Ziaâs Martial Law). This was my first attempt at translation so Iâm not sure how successful it was but I did learn a lot from the attempt.
The story Iâm sharing here is called âDr Walterâ. One of the main themes of the story is the discrimination faced by minorities in Pakistan (in this case Christians).
When the Waltersâ house was going up, we â Talat, Aqib, Qamar, Mazhar and I â hung around the construction site in the evenings and romped on the sand and gravel piles. At the time, most houses in Model Town had been built by Hindus before the Partition and abandoned when they fled in disorder to India so that some Muslim, trying to take over their houses, or for no reason at all, wouldnât behead them or sprinkle oil on them and set them on fire or stab them in the stomach with a sharp knife. This precipitous departure left many unclaimed plots on which new houses were built from time to time. When construction of the Waltersâ house began near us, a minor frisson of excitement entered our slow-moving lives.
Horsing around, boring tunnels in the sandpiles, Mazhar had asked a laborer:
âWhose house is this?â
âSai,â he had said, meaning âIsai.â Christians. People who follow Jesus Christ as first among the Prophets of God, just as the Jews consider Moses. Well, what someone believes or not and why are mysterious and dangerous things about which I canât say anything, but even before the laborer told us, we had a sense that these people were of some other religion because several signs suggested they werenât our sort.
At this time, the obnoxious General Zia had not descended on our country like a curse and new revelations about our religion, Islam, hadnât begun to mushroom. No one in their wildest dreams could have imagined that prayers would become mandatory in offices or that women wouldnât be able to appear on television without covering their heads, or that punishments would be meted out to people seen eating or drinking during Ramzan. And, more surprising than all these, that every day, before the entire country, news on TV would be delivered in Arabic. All this was about to happen, just some days after the Walters built their house near us. Continue reading Doctor Walter (Translation from Urdu)